The McGuffin –
FADE IN:
In a
common industrial site a suspicious looking individual walks across whilst
holding a conspicuous briefcase that appears out of the ordinary for the attire
of the individual.
CUT / FADE TO:
INT. AN INDUSTRIAL AREA – OUTSIDE – DAY
CARRIER,
scruffy individual, shady appearance, carrying an out of place briefcase.
CARRIER
(On phone) I’m at the meeting place, where are
you? (Looks down and
sees a bag on the floor)… You want me to put the bag on?..(Puts bag over head)
INT. MEETING ROOM – TIME UNKNOWN
SUITED
MAN, smart appearance, official looking, powerful, appears to be anticipating
the arrival of something or someone.
CARRIER
(Already sat down,Bag off head)
SUITED
MAN
…Do you have it?
CARRIER
Yes… Do you have what we agreed
upon? (SUITED MAN passes
envelope)
Where’s the rest? This isn’t what
we agreed upon!
SUITED
MAN
You’ll get the rest after your
next job. That is what we ‘agreed upon’.
CARRIER
I’ll take all of my money now or
I’ll walk!
SUITED
MAN
I’m sure your dear mother wouldn’t
appreciate that answer. (Sly
smile)
CARRIER
(Scowl) Fine. (Places briefcase on the table {pause} slides the briefcase across)
SUITED
MAN
(Checks the contents, approves, slides across second
envelope) This is your next assignment; you may leave now.
CARRIER
Wait, I can’t keep doing this, I
can’t keep doing these jobs for you.
SUITED
MAN
You don’t have a choice, Kate Fur. (KATE looks distressed)
END
SCENE
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